There are probably some very talented writes here, feel free to post your work (if it's short, just put it in the post, if it's long, link to it as a file to download.) You can do poems, short works of writing, fiction, non-fiction, prose, essays, reports, whatever you feel like or have.
The goal of this topic is to have:
-Various users posting their work. Don't be shy!
-Readers commenting on what they liked and what they think can be improved (sound familiar? :-P)
-Authors updating with new chapters/segments (WIPs)
I'll start.
Some people in IRC remembered me asking a bunch of SciFi questions, pointing me to the movie Equilibrium for what my story idea most resembled. I have completed (and handed in to my creative writing class) the first two chapters. Chapter 1 is 11 pages (double spaced), chapter 2 is 3 pages long; this is because it was suggested my chapter 1 was too long and should be split. Chapter 2 feels incomplete, despite me ending with the depressing phrase that signifies a chapter end.
The Beauty Killers Chapter 1 and 2
My other idea for a sequel/anthology (which I have yet to start, I've only begun forming plotlines and creating characters) is to combine two Studio Ghibli movies,
Castle in the Sky and
Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind that connects the two storylines.