Welcome to TASVideos, Shot313. You might wanna take a moment to look at this post and read what I've said.
You surprisingly made an effort on this submission, which is not very often in first submissions, but as
Spikestuff and I pointed out, your run is seemingly slower than
the currently published run by at least one second. Look for any mistakes you may have made and try to match your efforts to those of the fastest run you can find, then beat it.
I'm not sure where the slowdowns could be in this run compared to KingKappa and Denial140's. Given that they both use different versions of BizHawk (this run uses 2.3, the publication uses 2.9.1), it may be due to emulation differences. I could very much be wrong about that though (and probably haven't figured out yet that older versions of BizHawk are still acceptable to TASVideos as well).
Also, I believe you submitted the extended input for the high score; for
Super Mario Bros. Deluxe runs, it's usually on the last input where it ends. The extended high score input can serve as an additional download.
Remember,
all of this is to encourage you to improve and do better, not to discourage you. I know that at least
I wanna see you improve, and I'm sure there's probably several others that feel the same. Hopefully.
Nonetheless... Ask questions, get with staff, and request feedback of your run before submitting.
Use the userfiles if you're certain that this run is not up to standards for publication (e.g. for WIPs).
Go again when you've optimized all you can... I won't be voting for now though.
P.S.: There hasn't been an optimized
"warpless" or
"challenge mode" submission for this game yet... Maybe you could try your hand at one of these? Just a thought.
Here is an
overlay comparison (click here) that I made with not much effort (admittingly), but you should be able to see the differences between the two runs.
Red: This run
Blue: [6277] GBC Super Mario Bros. Deluxe "warps" by KingKappa & Denial140 in 04:57.45
Both clips are aligned so that Mario in both runs starts moving in World 1-1 at the same time.
Yes, this comparison could be better. It's not perfect, but whatever works.