Posted: 1/12/2015 7:01 PM
Post subject: Request: Proof reading my short story
Quote
Walker_Boh
Former player
Joined: 4/16/2004
Posts: 1276
Location: Uppsala, Sweden
Hello, Tasvideos! As some of you might know I'm an author, with five novels behind me. Recently I was asked to contribute to a sci fi anthology. The anthology consists of short stories, written in english by swedish or swedish speaking authors. I have now finished a short story that I'm satisfied with. I've come to realize though, that since english is not my native language, it's very challenging to have the same feel for the language as you have with your own native language. Hence there is bound to be risks for bugs in my text, and this is the reason for this post. I would like to ask if there's anyone here, that has english as his or hers native language (or that is extremely skilled), that would like to proof read my short story? I have a deadline to meet, so if you are up for this you'll have to read it in a few days. I can't offer much for it, but if this sounds interesting, please give me a pm and I can share more details, should I've omitted something here that slipped my mind :) The anthology will be called "Waiting for the Machines to Fall Asleep". One can read more about the publisher here: www.affront.se, although the information is in swedish. Thank you very much for your time! BR Hans Olsson (Walker Boh)
/Walker Boh
Posted: 1/12/2015 7:14 PM
Quote
Nach
Emulator Coder
Joined: 3/9/2004
Posts: 4588
Location: In his lab studying psychology to find new ways to torture TASers and forumers
How long is this short story? 5 pages? 30 pages?
Warning: Opinions expressed by Nach or others in this post do not necessarily reflect the views, opinions, or position of Nach himself on the matter(s) being discussed therein.
Posted: 1/12/2015 7:20 PM
Quote
Walker_Boh
Former player
Joined: 4/16/2004
Posts: 1276
Location: Uppsala, Sweden
That's a good question, which I apparently omitted! It's 26 pages, 1.5 points of line spacing. So for a short story it's fairly long, but not extremely long.
/Walker Boh
Posted: 1/12/2015 9:31 PM
Quote
Walker_Boh
Former player
Joined: 4/16/2004
Posts: 1276
Location: Uppsala, Sweden
I got two voulunteers! Big thanks guys for your support. I'll send you a pm shortly, and for the rest of you, should you be interested, I'll get back to when and where you can read the anthology!
/Walker Boh
Posted: 1/13/2015 1:29 AM
Quote
ALAKTORN
He/Him
Former player
Joined: 10/19/2009
Posts: 2527
Location: Italy
DS TAS of 2012
I might’ve wanted to volunteer but looking at your first post scared me. Whoever will be proofreading it is gonna have to fix a lot of stuff. Good luck. Edit: the easiest thing I can tell you is that languages go capitalized in English.
Posted: 1/13/2015 7:47 PM
(Edited: 1/14/2015 7:04 AM)
Quote
Walker_Boh
Former player
Joined: 4/16/2004
Posts: 1276
Location: Uppsala, Sweden
Edited.
/Walker Boh
Posted: 1/13/2015 8:11 PM
Quote
MUGG
Editor, Expert player (2330)
Joined: 5/15/2007
Posts: 3933
Location: Germany
Gameboy TASer of 2015 NES TAS of 2013 Gameboy TASer of 2011 Gameboy TASer of 2010
Feel free to PM me with a link to your story and I might take a look.
Youtube • Livestream • Progress 11th TASer of the Decade 2010-2019 !